15thMay_2024

今日托福(Academic Writing)

更改拼写、语法后

This is quite a controversial topic. In my opinion, I do believe that it makes a point for kids to learn from educational computer games. Andrew claims that children can learn all the basic knowledge in the traditional way by reading books instead of using computers. Besides, by teaching children in person, kids could benefit from communicating with their parents. However, I disagree with the idea of the second point Andrew makes. I think parents could also interact with kids by playing those games together. On the other hand, Kelly holds the opinion that it is important for kids to explore the digital world since computers are crucial components in modern society. Also, kids could acquire more information from the Internet than traditional books I believe.

From ChatGPT

The debate on young children using educational computer games is contentious. I believe these games can be beneficial for learning if used alongside parental interaction. Andrew suggests that traditional methods like reading books are better and argues that computer games hinder parent-child interaction. However, I disagree; parents can and should engage with their children through these games, enhancing both learning and bonding. Kelly supports the use of computers, emphasizing their importance in modern society and their ability to offer extensive learning resources beyond traditional books. I agree with Kelly, as integrating technology in early education can prepare children for a digital future while maintaining essential developmental interactions.

主要问题

1. 论点不足/句型
2. 存在语法错误主要集中在缺少限定词或者是单复数不分

今日

今天有点摆烂，不知道为什么因为错过了托福我最近总有非常强的负罪感，总觉得这个学期似乎什么正事都没干。

我都开始怀疑我这个学期是真的什么都没干，还是我自己妄自菲薄了