17thMay_2024

Academic Writing

Original text

In my point of view, I am deeply convinced that going out for a field trip is a crucial part for students to learn more knowledge which they can not learn from conventional in-classroom courses. As Paul mentioned, filed trip triggers his interest for becoming an astronomer when he was young. This is one clear evidence that support the idea of the benefit of a field trip. Although Kelly claims that it might be difficult for teacher to arrange their teaching pace in order to make sure that no instructional time being wasted, she does not deny what students could actually learn from the filed trip. In fact, a field trip may save more instructional time since students might be inspired by the trip and willing to pay more time and effort to the course.

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In my point of view, I am deeply convinced that going out for a field trip is a crucial part for students to learn more knowledge that they can not learn from conventional in-classroom courses. As Paul mentioned, field trips triggered his interest in becoming an astronomer when he was young. This is one clear evidence that supports the idea of the benefit of a field trip. Although Kelly claims that it might be difficult for teachers to arrange their teaching pace in order to make sure that no instructional time is wasted, she does not deny what students could learn from the field trip. A field trip may save more instructional time since students might be inspired by the trip and willing to spend more time and effort on the course.

ChatGPT version

In my opinion, field trips are an essential component of education, offering students knowledge and experiences that are difficult to gain within the confines of a classroom. For example, Paul attributes (v. 把……归因于) his passion for astronomy to an inspiring field trip he took as a child, demonstrating the profound (adj.（影响）深刻的) impact such experiences can have. Although Kelly points out the logistical challenges in arranging field trips, such as maintaining the teaching pace, she acknowledges their educational value. The potential for field trips to inspire students can make them a worthwhile investment, as inspired students are likely to dedicate more time and effort to their studies, ultimately enhancing their learning and possibly saving instructional time in the long run. This balance of benefits and challenges makes a strong case for the importance of field trips in education.

日记

今天总算是周五了，昨天睡的太晚今天也起的晚了。

下午也是摆大烂，总感觉很劳累。